July 2012
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Reflections on Project 3
Project 3 was defiantly the most enjoyable of the three projects so far for me. In project three from the start I had a vision of how to outline it(very different from projects 1 and 2). I could build up a narrative of how I became literate in computerized technology. In order to do this I would need to think back to early days. After lots of brainstorming I came up with three main instances of...
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Responce to Essays Five and Six
Essay Five by Erica Wright did a great job of responding to the essay prompt. She takes her time to develop a story of how she evolved into using Facebook to influence her opinions on to others. She did an alright job with MLA except it seems she has two spaces between her name and page number, she wrote the date in the Americanized format and used a comma in the date. This can also be seen in the...
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Revision Plan for Project 3
From the review I got on Eli I know the second and third paragraphs of my essay are areas to focus on additions. The reader said he would like to have heard more in those sections about the story portion. I also need to take a closer look at what it really means to be writing a narrative, possibly by looking at the sample essays to be released. Nevertheless after reviewing these sample essays I...
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Response to the Arola Piece
In Arola’s piece she gives a survey of her early technological experiences and demonstrates the effects of her lack of at such a young age. A few things that support this accusation can be found all over the piece. First she takes time in multiple parts to defend her lack of technological literacy. She shows how over time she noticed these short comings and adapted to such. Lastly she gives...
